Atleast five characters
OceaneMireille 05-03-2010 02:56:01 AM UTC
kiki said, in haiku #32, that it had to be 5-7-5, it just has to be 17 syllables total
Asia 07-03-2010 05:06:29 AM UTC
true, but form should be tempered by experience, not naivete... (I'm only quoting.)
Asia 07-03-2010 05:25:30 AM UTC
...I'm only nit-picking here, but three of your four entries thus far have eighteen syllables. Your first entry only has sixteen, which I believe is fine. Content supercedes form, but form is valued for its brevity and flow.
OceaneMireille 07-03-2010 06:08:55 PM UTC
i just counted wrong... darnit, i used those for my english paper. No wonder im so bad at math.
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OceaneMireille
05-03-2010
02:56:01 AM UTC
kiki said, in haiku #32, that it had to be 5-7-5, it just has to be 17 syllables total
Asia
07-03-2010
05:06:29 AM UTC
true, but form should be
tempered by experience,
not naivete...
(I'm only quoting.)
Asia
07-03-2010
05:25:30 AM UTC
...I'm only nit-picking here, but three of your four entries thus far have eighteen syllables. Your first entry only has sixteen, which I believe is fine. Content supercedes form, but form is valued for its brevity and flow.
OceaneMireille
07-03-2010
06:08:55 PM UTC
i just counted wrong... darnit, i used those for my english paper. No wonder im so bad at math.