Actually you weren’t that far off. To me at least, haiku are crafted, as if fashioned from clay. Remove a little here, add a little there –then you may have a haiku. I'm not your editor, but ...
Knowing simple rules
You scream at me as if law--
What else can you teach?
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CDSinex
16-12-2009
05:46:00 PM UTC
Actually you weren’t that far off. To me at least, haiku are crafted, as if fashioned from clay. Remove a little here, add a little there –then you may have a haiku. I'm not your editor, but ...
Knowing simple rules
You scream at me as if law--
What else can you teach?