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  • winter lake
  • only my eyes
  • disturb the view
Tags: winter, eyes, lake

1 Comment

HaikuSociety
09-12-2009
06:55:22 PM UTC

It's true that the syllable count is not 5-7-5 but it doesn't have to be. The spirit of the haiku is there. The 5-7-5 count is for the Japanese 'on' or 'moras' which are sound units, and not syllables as we know then in English. So the 5-7-5 pattern is a guideline at best.

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